21-Poet of the Fifth Dimension 五次元歌人/ 風鈴
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そうした一色から開放されたなか、フォロアーが日毎に増えていく中で知り合ったのがソフィアという友だちであった。
ソフィアは私の短歌に興味をもってくれよくコメントしてくれた。私の投稿は、短歌と写真であった。投稿短歌にも写真を添えた。理由は、海外の人たちに、歌中で詠っている対象を目で確認してもらいたかったからだ。この投稿手段は、後日、改めて正解だったとも思った。というのは、たとえば、ある花を詠った場合、学術名はさておいて、通称の花名、あるいは花の色等が日本とは違う場合があるからだ。また、日本の花名のほうが分類が細かいという場合もある。つづく
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Under
such a situation, while being released from Isshiki and the number of my
friends was increasing, I met a friend called Sofia on the web.
Sofia was interested in my tanka and often commented. My posts were tankas and photos. I also attached the photo to the posted tanka. The reason was that I wanted foreign people to visually confirm the subjects on my tanka. I thought that this posting method was correct again later. This is because, for example, when a certain flower is made into tanka, its name, color, etc. may differ from Japan. In some cases, Japanese flower names are more detailed. Next
Sofia was interested in my tanka and often commented. My posts were tankas and photos. I also attached the photo to the posted tanka. The reason was that I wanted foreign people to visually confirm the subjects on my tanka. I thought that this posting method was correct again later. This is because, for example, when a certain flower is made into tanka, its name, color, etc. may differ from Japan. In some cases, Japanese flower names are more detailed. Next
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夏去りぬ 葉月の嵐に蹴散らされ 風鈴の音の虚ろにさはぐ
summer is over
blown up by
August storm
lost in a flash
a wind-bell
…chiming...chiming...
in vain...
©Rika Inami稲美 里佳
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ソフィアのコメント:
「きらきら輝くような響きがありながら物憂げな言葉は、風鈴のはかなさにぴったり適っています。ブラボー、最高の出来です :-)」
ソフィアのコメントへの私の返事:
「ご丁寧なコメント、ありがとうございます。とても嬉しいです。台風後の涼しさを詠いました。創造的な木曜日でありますように」
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Sofia’s comment:
“Glorious
and yet somber words, aptly applied to the frailty of a wind chime.
Bravo, most well done. :-)”
Bravo, most well done. :-)”
My reply comment :
“Thank
you very much for the detail comment. It makes me happy. I made the coolness
after typhoon into tanka.
Wish you a creative Thursday(^_^)”
Wish you a creative Thursday(^_^)”
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秋が来て月の光を浴びながら往く末寒し我が命の露
©Ryuuji Suwa
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